What is changing in the Stranger

Finally determined exactly what is to change in the story. The approach at first didn´t make sense and I felt it didn't connect that well. I also had huge doubts about the topic I was going for in the story but as it just occured in my family I'm now dropping it completely.

What changes?

* Deon's behavior. He will be less evil, but more manipulative also towards others.
His goal also changed.
* Ryan's and Lisa's response towards Raina.
* The people around Raina change some actions.
* The ending changes completely. It will be less 'happy' than I first had in mind.
* Less horror, more psychological. It's quite hard to demonstrate horror in an audioplay xD
* Raina will be slightly stronger as the situations changed.

Yeah, something like that. The idea is there, but now I still have to write it in the scripts which is a challenge. I now have to determine what to keep from the original story and what to change. If I change one little detail it will have impact on the rest of the story.

So yeah, I'm still working on it people! Just a little slow also due to personal things that happen around me.

In April I will be back in Canada, so it's uncertain how much time I'll have when I start my internship.

Character bio - Deon

Full name: -will be revealed-

Nickname: Deon

Age: Unknown, but he looks 20

Birthday: Unknown

Eyes: Dark

Hair color – Black

Hair length – Spiky hair

Height: 1.78 (5.10 ft)

Appearance: Normal / muscular build,

Family: Mother

Friends worthy of mention: None

Personality: Deon is a mysterious, deceptive guy. He tries to hide his true identity as he knows how people will react when they learn the truth. He doesn't care if he has to lie about his life.

He doesn't trust people easily, especially not after he was betrayed in life. Still, he tries to look for that special someone who will understand him and can maybe help him. He is mostly full of hate and the thought of revenge dominates his thoughts. When someone lets him down, he makes sure that person will pay for it. He will do everything to succeed in his goal. He feels lonely most of the time and always yearns for someone keeping him company.

Hobbies: Going on adventures, visiting places that are dear to him

Loves: Visiting places that belong to his family, pretty girls

Hates: being lonely, people who let him down

Voice: Medium, medium -low

History:  To be revealed

Jealousy rate: 9 – He is jealous of other people's lives. 

Patience: 2 – Everything has to happen whenever he wants it.

Panic rate: 1 –He has no fear.

Anger rate: 9 – He is angry at everything, blames himself and others and feels misunderstood.

Honesty rate – 3 While Deon is honest about his feelings he does lie a lot about his true identity.